ના પુછો મુજને, દુઃખ શુ છે?,
સુખ જો મળે મુજને,તો ખબર પડે,
ના પુછો મુજને,શાંતી શુ છે?,
કબ્ર જો મળે મુજને,તો ખબર પડે,
ના પુછો મુજને,નફરત શુ છે?,
પ્રેમ જો મળે મુજને,તો ખબર પડે,
ના પુછો મુજને,મંજીલ શુ છે?,
તુ! જો મળે મુજને,તો ખબર પડે,
ના પુછો મુજને,”દીપ” કોણ છે?,
પ્રગટાવેજો કોઇ મુજને,તો ખબર પડે,
-દીપક પરમાર (“દીપ”)
April 25, 2007 at 9:07 am |
Its Great
Story of life in just a few simple words
I am becoming fan of deep……
April 26, 2007 at 4:11 pm |
Its Nice.
But one think is that from My point Of View :::
“Log kahete he ke Deep jalta he,
Par vo kya jane ke Deep Sirf Roshni Deta he,
Deep(Diya)to sirf Jumta he,Roti he to Bati.”
April 30, 2007 at 4:26 pm |
nice one…
uniqueness of your poem is ” It is so simple ” and that’s why it describes your DEEP and focal way of life so transparently .
January 2, 2009 at 1:30 pm |
Its owsome. keep it up.
Its shows u have very bright future in poetry. keep it up.
January 2, 2009 at 1:31 pm |
Its Great
Story of life in just a few simple words
I am becoming fan of deep……
January 2, 2009 at 1:32 pm |
Ohhhhhhhhh……….
What a nice Poem….. I think now u have to write one book.
Aava vicharo aavache kyathi???
excelent yaar……
January 2, 2009 at 1:33 pm |
hi this is very nice poem really. I feel i m reading big poet’s poem.keep it up.
January 2, 2009 at 1:34 pm |
wah beta wah ,,,
January 2, 2009 at 1:34 pm |
Its good one..
keep writing..
January 2, 2009 at 1:35 pm |
waw v r proud of u deepak and keep it up. I think in future v’ll have to take appointment 2 meet u right???????
January 2, 2009 at 1:36 pm |
exelent….keep writing…i like ur thoughts…it’s great philosophy in few words….
January 2, 2009 at 1:36 pm |
DEEPAKBHAI,bahu moti vaat kari didhi tame, ane te pan aatli sahajtathi ? kahevu pade bhai hon !